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*rofling at realization of, on first arriving in NY, Liam had clam chowder and I had a chicken panini*
I got a huuuuuuge sketchbook in Oneonta the other day, and needed to test it out. <3
Now, I'm not playing favorites with the ATS, I just...have a hard time drawing two characters in one image. So I do those images on photoshop, and, SURPRISE(!) my tablet hates Liam's computer and CS4.
:c

Regardless, here be my pic for the trade with :iconvelocitystar:

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:iconeddboy:
If there is one thing that I hate about Sonic, it would be that his fans take up a little too much space. This isn't just the case of DeviantArt, this is also the case of YouTube, ShezzyArt, Furifanty, Myspace, and other sites as well. Although you put some actual effort in this (while the other Sonic-style gimps have not) there are some very jarring flaws with your picture.

First and foremost is the way the hands are formed. The picture has the girl facing the front to where her right is our left. The problem? She has two left hands! How could you not notice this when drawing?

Another flaw is that the stars are a bit wobbly and disorganized. Drawing a pentagram first would have fixed this.

Finally, the lighting and coloring appear dim on her body and on her hair. It also seems unnecessary to add any shade effects to the large gray star.
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:iconkakyuuspark:
That looks very nice,dear.

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:iconblack-cat-virus:
This one caught my eye big time
I like the pose you used and the calming colors
along with the relaxed expression

you did a really nice job shading!
but i think it needs a little more depth with the lighter areas
if you take an eraser and lightly erase some of the lighter parts it may give it more depth

other than that this looks great! one of your best :heart:
:iconemerald-eyes-phoenix:
I KNOOOOOOOW. T_T
I wanted to use a darker blue to do that, but, well..that was my darkest blue. |D
Thank you for the feedback. <3

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:iconblack-cat-virus:
Aw hehe
Well it looks stunning
you did a great job :heart:
Anytime~
:iconthunderwolfang:
Amazing!! :wow:

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:iconamythornrose:
This looks fabulous, I love your style. <33 Nice job coloring. :>

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:iconnightberry-candy:
I like the colouring on this and a cute job with the pose c: but one of her hands have problems, looks like she has 2 left hands :c.
I think that background fits her so well o3o

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:iconxryuuseix:
Amazing pic~I love the pose and everything <33 and the coloring is good aswell~~

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:iconvelocitystar:
AWESOME!

I simply love this! You drew her perfectly! <3

She looks super cute in your style!

Thanks so much!

I will have my half up soon. :3

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