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*rofling at realization of, on first arriving in NY, Liam had clam chowder and I had a chicken panini*
I got a huuuuuuge sketchbook in Oneonta the other day, and needed to test it out. <3 Now, I'm not playing favorites with the ATS, I just...have a hard time drawing two characters in one image. So I do those images on photoshop, and, SURPRISE(!) my tablet hates Liam's computer and CS4. :c Regardless, here be my pic for the trade with Comments
This one caught my eye big time
I like the pose you used and the calming colors along with the relaxed expression you did a really nice job shading! but i think it needs a little more depth with the lighter areas if you take an eraser and lightly erase some of the lighter parts it may give it more depth other than that this looks great! one of your best I KNOOOOOOOW. T_T
I wanted to use a darker blue to do that, but, well..that was my darkest blue. |D Thank you for the feedback. <3 -- ~writeaway~BandGeeks~THEDABANDNERDCLUB*CoralineFC*Honeythecat-club |
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June 6
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Critiques
First and foremost is the way the hands are formed. The picture has the girl facing the front to where her right is our left. The problem? She has two left hands! How could you not notice this when drawing?
Another flaw is that the stars are a bit wobbly and disorganized. Drawing a pentagram first would have fixed this.
Finally, the lighting and coloring appear dim on her body and on her hair. It also seems unnecessary to add any shade effects to the large gray star.
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